Senin, 24 Maret 2014
WRITING 3 ASSIGNMENT
NAME :
SEPTIKA ARIYANTI
SRN :12340006
4th SEMESTER
• When you write a paragraph, you should put into three of
component of paragrpahs namely : Topic Sentence, Body or supporting sentence,
and concluding sentence
• State the main idea of the paragraph in clearly constructed topic
sentence. Make sure each sentence is related to the central thought. (Unity)
•Develop your paragraph with specific details and example (Adequate
development)
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TITLE
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SEPTIKA ARIYANTI
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Introductory Paragraph
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I will describe about myself,
everything that realted about me. I write this paragraph to share other
people. I just want inform to other people, in order to they know about me.
This paragraph describe about me in general, tell about my appearence and my
hobby. So, read this one carefully.
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IDENTIFICATION
(Body
Paragraph)
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My name is Septika Ariyanti, I am
19th years old, I was born in Metro city on September, 16th 1994
because I was born on September , therefore my parents give me the name
“Septika” and then my father’s name is Hariyanto, so my last name is “
Ariyanti” it is almost same as my father’s name. I ask to my friends to call
me “Ceppy”. Now, I am university
student on Muhammadiyah University especially on english department and I am
in 4th semester.
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DESCRIPTION
(Body Paragraph)
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My origin is from Central Java and
my religion is Islam, because my parent’s come from Central Java. Although I
am Javanese,I live at Metro city, especially on Madura street No.85 22
Hadimulyo Barat. I live with parents, my young sister and also with my
grandparents.
Physically, I have light brown
skin, and my eyes colour are black. I always wear glasses, I have been
wearing glasses for 8 years. My hair is short, but I always use veil. My
blood type is B. I have height about 163 cm, and my weight around 45 kg. As a
woman, I am tall enough. On other hand, My body is not ideal because my
weight just 45 kg, many people say to me to increase my weight. I think it is
difficult to increase my weight because I don’t like vegetables and milk.
My hobby is reading,
because it can increase my knowledge. I also like listening to the music. I
prefer Korean music to Indonesian music because it is unique. Moreover, I
like Korean music when I was in Junior High School. My favourit song is the
song which is sung by Kim Taeyeon, Lee Donghae, and BEAST. Although I am
English student, I like everything which related about Korea and I have some
Korean books. Sometimes, I reading book to fulfil my free time, Not only
educational book which is read by me, but also non-educational book such as
novel, religion book, or knowledge book. Besides, I more spend my time just
listening music and memorize the song lyric.
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Concluding Paragraph
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All of those about me, although my
name is Septika Ariyanti most of my friends call me “Ceppy” it is shorter and
easier than they have to call “ Septika”. As a student in Teacher Training
and Education Faculty especially in English department, I have studied hard
,pray to Allah SWT, doing what I can do, and always improve myself to better
person in the future. I think that is the best thing of me.
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That's good example of descriptive paragraph
BalasHapusnice explanation sista :)
BalasHapusHi Ceppy :D
BalasHapusNice descriptions by the way..
Oh yeah, may I give some corrections?
ceppy: yes, please... :D hahaha
This is actually not really matter, but you need to know..
If you want to say your age, like... [I am 19th years old] it is not correct, the correct one is "I am 19 years old / I am nineteen years old."
19th is ordinal number, so it can't be used to tell someone's age.
Over all, that's great. Visit back my blog and correct me if I am wrong :D OK? Thanks ~
nice description :)
BalasHapusI also like korean musics! I think we have same hobby sist :p
BalasHapusThat's amazing sis.. please visit my blog :)
BalasHapusWhat should I say? You made a great paragraph, even though you missed something. Why dont you mention that you like *******. :D
BalasHapusVisit me back, sister Ceppy.